“You stand so tall and proud, and
yet you have something to hide.”
Royce
grimaced. She had seen the two Mauraug
heading towards her in the empty, poorly lit corridor. One had white and black markings patterned
across its fur that reminded her of a cow; the other was a light tan with small
darker blotches in a semi-regular pattern covering its body. Both were dressed in tight, black poly
overalls. Neither carried any obvious
weapons, but you could never tell with Mauraug.
“Humans
stand tall when they are proud. We know
this. Their pride is not in their
strength, is it? It is not in their
power – no, it is merely in their height.”
Cowhide continued.
Royce
sighed and slumped a little bit. She
turned towards the two mocking her.
“There, I’m slouching. Better?”
The
shorter one that she had mentally tagged as Leopard Print lifted its muzzle
back from curved, metal teeth and let out a great woof of air. “You take a posture of aggression, then? You are all but admitting your guilt.”
Cowhide
reached out a long arm and put a spatulate hand against Leopard Print’s
chest. “Be restrained, comrade. Perhaps she
doesn't know.” It turned towards
her. “I am Mashaun. This is Hrogki. We have stopped you because it appears that
you are violating the Highest Law. Both
of our sensors indicate an unlicensed Mauraug implant in your body.”
“By the
dictates of Dominion Sector Seven we are empowered to remove such implants personally.” Hrokgi added savagely.
Wonderful.
This is the last thing that I needed right now.
“You’re
a long way from Dominion Sector Seven, Hrokgi.”
Royce countered. Turning and
running might be a bad idea; they could probably stun or even tackle her before
she got halfway to safe space. Mauraug respect strength, they respect
authority, they respect a will to dominate.
She remembered her grandmother’s words clearly. If
you’re going to be among them, don’t forget that. Never back down once you’ve claimed a
position, and never, ever turn your back.
“We’re in Undesignated Sector Twenty Three. We’re under Generic Collective Law right
now. You have no right to violate the
person or belongings of another sapient being.
You want to turn me in based off of faulty readings on your scanner,
that’s just fine. I’ll watch as they
laugh you out of court.”
Hrokgi
looked up at Mashaun questioningly.
Mashaun remained impassive. “It
may soon come to pass that this Sector becomes a Dominion sector. We all know that legal process takes some
time… do you feel so confident that the laws of Sha’abahn will not dominate
before the end of your trial?”
Hrokgi
hissed through its bared metal fangs.
“The Highest Law outweighs all such local codes! Present the portion of your anatomy that the
device has been implanted in. You have
no right to bear it! You are in
violation!”
Royce
decided that pointing out the irony of their invocation if the Highest Law
while mocking the importance humans placed on height might be
counterproductive. “I’m a security
officer on this station, sapients. Do
you really want to bring that kind of trouble on yourself?”
Hrokgi
glared. “She admits it! She admits her violation!”
Mashaun
licked its lips. “I have never seen you
before, so you can’t hold any real rank.
A low ranking security officer disappearing in an unfinished station
frequented by uncontacted species in a neglected corner of the galaxy? I hardly think anyone will notice.”
Royce
shivered as a bead of cold sweat trickled down from the base of her short
cropped hair to her collar. He had a
point. She couldn’t take two fully grown
Mauraug unarmed on a good day.
Suddenly
a nearby intercom blared with a remarkable likeness of the stodgy tones of
Commander Kowalski . “This is your
station Commander. Corporal Dea, you
were supposed to report to Conference Room Thirteen for your presentation three
minutes ago. The Akari diplomat is
getting impatient. What’s the hold up?”
All
three froze for a brief second, and Royce called out, “On my way. Sorry Commander, there was a misunderstanding
in one of the access corridors.”
“If you
don’t get up here now we’ll have more than a misunderstanding on our
hands. Move! Kowalski out.”
Royce
smiled, pulling her lips apart more broadly than usual in a not-so-subtle
gesture. “Looks like I will be missed, fellas.” Not closing her
mouth, she jerked her chin up. “One
side. I don’t want to keep the Commander
waiting.”
Hrokgi
and Mashaun were silent, though Hrokgi’s lips continued to twitch as they drew
out of the way. Royce walked past them,
deliberately employing a rolling, aggressive gait. If they
were humans, they’d think I was trying to saunter she thought, grinning
internally. Going against her
grandmother’s advice, she walked past them, balls of her feet on the ground.
Behind
her, Hrokgi hissed in Mauraug. “Demon
tricks!” Mashaun was silent. She didn’t turn to look. Smarter
than you look, Hrokgi. I was close to
ruining my pants.
One she
was safely out of the access corridor and into an empty lift, she sagged
against the wall and buried her face in her hands. “Thanks, Lim.”
Her
AI’s smooth tones rang out from a nearby speaker. “What was I going to do, let them pry you
open? Nope, not going to happen. Not to my Royce. Not on my watch.”
“Why’d
you choose the Commander? Chief Security
Officer Lun might have been more believable.”
“The
Commander is human, Royce. Lun’s an
Awakener – you know how the Mauraug feel about the fungi. It might have made them even nastier. I want my baby girl to be safe. Only the best for my Royce!”
“Thanks,
dad.”
Royce enjoyed teasing him about his old-fashioned paternal attitude even
though it was kind of reassuring at times.
“How much longer do I have to keep this damned thing in me?”
“Only
three days till Marsten and company come to retrieve it.”
“Ugh. This feels so wrong.” She straightened her
spine but not the twist that worry brought to her features.
“It
is. It’s highly illegal. But you know that unless it’s housed, they’ll
find it in no time, and unless we get it to the authorities they’ll never know
about what Shankuk and his people are trying to do. You agreed to this. Own your decision, my girl! It’s not like you could take it out now
without making things worse.”
“Yeah.” She sighed again. “Yeah.
This means that you’re going to be extra busy the next three days,
though.”
“Oh? Why is that?”
“Because
you’re going to keep tabs on every Mauraug on this station so I don’t have to
turn you in for impersonating a citizen again.”
They both knew that she was only teasing; having an AI capable of
bending the rules when necessary was invaluable in her line of work.
Lim
chuckled. “I should have thought of that
already. Don’t worry; no one’s gonna lay
a hand on my Royce!”
Hi, Nathan signing on. I'm working on rereading the storylines on Empyrean, and since nobody else has commented anywhere yet, I thought I might log a few thoughts on each chapter as I pass through. Maybe I can even prompt a little discussion along the way.
ReplyDeleteThis chapter was my first realization of how well Laine writes dialogue. The hard part is to make it sound like people are just talking, while still conveying the important information that moves a story along. You also have to decide on each character's "voice", although that gets easier as they become more real and start talking in your head. The other big bonus of this chapter is how well it establishes characters: you know who Royce is and (some of) what she's up to. You get a pretty good idea of how a couple of Maraug goons operate, and what the cross-species interface is like. Last, this does what an opening chapter should do: you know some bad business is coming soon and can't wait to see how it goes down.
I'm hooked! Very good first chapter. Straight in the action. We already have a hint of the political and social climate and we saw some of the species. And there is a whiff of mystery to hook us into coming back for more. Well done. :)
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